
I identify exactly where your manuscript starts losing reader momentum — and whether it’s structurally viable before you invest months rewriting.
Designed for serious writers before they commit to editing, querying, or publishing.
Most manuscripts don’t fail because of prose. They fail because structural momentum collapses.
Beta readers describe it as “slow.”
Agents describe it as “not landing.”
Writers feel it but can’t diagnose it.
Structural issues quietly waste months of rewriting.
I audit your manuscript for:
Momentum drop-off points.
Escalation integrity.
Act-level structural stability.
Clear viability verdict: continue, restructure, or halt.
Rewrite priority mapping.
You receive a direct, structured report. No fluff. No vague encouragement.
Full Structural Momentum Audit
Founding Rate: £295
(5 Slots) Limited to initial launch period.
Delivery within 7–10 days
Includes:
• Structural viability verdict
• Momentum map
• Escalation assessment
• 3–5 key structural risks
• Rewrite priority roadmap
Kill / Continue Assessment
Founding Rate: £195
(5 Slots) Limited to initial launch period.
Delivery within 7–10 days
Includes:
Viability verdict
Core structural risk summary
Clear next-step recommendation
Who is this for?
Indie authors before hiring an editor
Writers receiving “it’s not landing” feedback
Authors unsure whether to rewrite or move on
Series writers evaluating long-term viability
Get in Touch: [email protected]